I’ve included a few different versions of an article I wrote for S.F.Weekly – a review of Echo & The Bunnymen, on the eve of their big post-millennium reunion tour, and also celebrating the release of a lavish box set retrospective of their career. Each version is somewhat different, in order to illustrate the criteria set forth by different editors at the same publication. I thought this might be of interest to any budding writers, by providing a bit of insight into the writing process, although all of the editors’ notes have been removed. I won’t say which one made the final cut, however …Maybe you can guess, or pick a favorite of your own!